2013年3月2日雅思大作文真题:Information Technology

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少。

With the help of the advanced technology , people now are able to acquire the degrees through online learning courses rather than studying in a classroom ; Personally , believe that its benefits far outweighs its drawbacks ; of course , as many people concern , distance courses may have certain disadvantages ; first, a high level of self discipline is required when one chooses online study ; this is because no teachers are there to encourage you , remind you of the pace o study ;therefore , it may see to be a bit difficult for those who are poor at personal managements to get the degrees ; secondly , with little peer discussions and interactions with professors , learners may feel frustrated when they encounter difficulties ,which may lead to a poor learning result in these courses ; So, it seems not everyone is suitable to take a distance course; however , think such distance learning can bring more benefits ; one of the most apparent advantages is that , it has marginally cut down the cost ; since , the university and colleges provide teaching service by internet , they pay less for room rents and the cost is able to be reduced to a great extent ,which have released students' financial burdens ; and then , online learning enables people to study more flexible ; people can choose to learn whenever they are free and choose to study in wherever they feel comfortable ,which traditional teaching never competes ; also , by distance courses, students are able to learn from the accomplished professors from the best universities ; without the geographical limitations ; therefore , the benefits of distance courses are very profound and attractive , to conclude , although distance may cause certain issues , overall its advantages far outweigh disadvantage;