2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉。

The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China and celebrate in lunar calendar 15th Agust . This festival also meas unit , so all the people in one family will come to together to celebrate it. In this day, people also will prepare moom cake and other candies and enjoy the full moon at night. In modern time, there are also other activities to celebrate this festival, like traveling or visiting you friends and etc.