小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I have a good friend who is name Mary.She is very tall and thin,and she is cute too.She has a head of black hair and a pair of big and bright eyes.She has a lot fo hobbies, such as swimming,sing and dance.However,she is good at dancing which again a second price in our school.in addition that,she alway help her mother do some homework.What a wonderful girls!