考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,we can observe distinctly that some remarkable changes have taken place in the past several years with regard to the number of the netizens in China.Based on the data provided,folks can see that the number of the netizens in the countryside has been on a rapid rise all the time.In the year of 2002,the volume was merely 5 million and it went sharply up to 120 million in 2010.Meanwhile,the city has witnessed a steady increase as well,reaching 300 million in 2010. It is of no difficulty for me to come up with some factors to account for the phenomenon.First of all,with the tempo of life speeding up,the internet has become increasingly indispensable in many inhabitants' daily life.In terms of a recent official report,approximately 77% of office staffs cannot function without the internet.In addition,we must admit that the internet,as a highly efficient means of communication,shortens the distance between people.Finally,the fact cannot be ignored that the internet will help us keep up with the latest information,wherever we are. Considering what has been argued so far,we can safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal and positive.And I confirmedly believe that it is bound to continue in the years to come.