可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;全文结构较为严谨。
My new teacher is Chinese teacher who is from Shanwei district Guangdong province.She looks so young and actually she is 38 years old now.She has a head of balck hairs with a pair of big and bright eyes.She is very good at teaching.She is patience to solve our questions and always join to us to discussion.Afer claass,she makes a friend with us which we can talk with her.She is not only our teacher but also our friend.