句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
My new teacher is Chinese teacher who is from Shanwei district Guangdong province.She looks so young and actually she is 38 years old now.She has a head of balck hairs with a pair of big and bright eyes.She is very good at teaching.She is patience to solve our problems and always join to discussion.Afer class,she makes friends with us which we can talk with her.She is not only our teacher but also our friend.