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My new teacher is Chinese teacher who is from Shanwei district Guangdong province.She looks so young and actually she is 38 years old now.She has a head of balck hairs with a pair of big and bright eyes.She is very good at teaching.She is patience to solve our problems and always join to discussion.After class,she makes friends with us which we can talk with her.She is not only our teacher but also our friend.