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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17583
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

I am not a supporter of that statement. There are two main reasons. Firstly, snap judgment is a kind of abilities. It does not mean that people make a decision without considering. In the contrary, people with snap judgement are required lots of experience and professional knowledge. In addition, it asks the decision maker, especially the principals in the financial industry, to keep things in mind organizationally to optimize their decision in a very short time, since the opportunities do not stand there and wait for anyone. People desiring the achievement in the changing world have to master those opportunities by using snap judgement. Secondly, the facts that snap judgments cause loss exist in most situations, not in all. For example, when the share market is unstable, share agents need to choose to sell, hold or buy shares quickly. If the snap judgment can never be trusted, who will be a client of share agents. That people giving them money and earning profit is helpful to dispute that statement.

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