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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章层次较为清晰；作者能够较恰当地使用高级词汇，但文中词汇丰富度不足，也存在一些拼写错误；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误。
with the economic incresing,more and more people have owns computer and the internet has been use by the everyone.However,the problem is found with the situation. it is convinent for our to use the internet and computers.but people's communicate become less than before on the family and friends. in my opinion,I don't think the electric communicate can replace face-to face contact.communicate is the brige betwen people and people.and whatever the society chang,face-to-face plays an important role. so,as far as i am concer,i absolutly disagree the view that electric can replace face-to-face contact .
