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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

With the economic increasing,more and more people have their own computer and the internet has been use by the everyone.However,the problem is found with the situation. It is convenient for our to use the internet and computers.but people's communicate become less than before on the family and friends. In my opinion,I don't think the electric communicate can replace face-to face contact.communicating is the brige betwen people and people.whatever the society changes,face-to-face plays an important role. So,as far as I am concert,I absolutely disagree the view that electric can replace face-to-face contact.

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