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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5576
要求:
用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。

用户练习作文:

This is our house.It's nice and big! It's a warm world. All family are live in it. Ha!This is my parents'room.It's big.My father is sit on the this chair.My mother is sleep on this bed. This is my room.It's big,too.It's name's "Ann park" because it's very lovely and interesting.This is my desk.Everyday I do homework here.This is my bed.It's pink because pink is my favourite color. This is our sitting room.It's tidy.It has a table,four chairs,a TV,a mat and a flower.We often sing songs here and watch TV here. This is our book room.It's big but small than the sitting room.It has many many wonderful books.We are read books and newspapers here. This is our bathroom.It's big.We take baths,wash faces and brush teeth here. Our house!Our warm world!I love U!

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