文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Hi Mary Chen, Because I have to go to Beijing on business for one week tomorrow. I'm afraid that i have to absent the discussing about holding a party on NewYear's Day. When the holding time and destination is workable,please make me posted.And the something i need to pay attention. Liming.