文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Dear Johnson, How are you. We have received 3000pcs products on Dec 12th. But according to our signing of the No.35 order, the quantity is 3500pcs. While the rest 500pcs goods is still not arrived our company. Please check your delivered product list, and find out what the problem is. We are looking forward to your early reply. Best Regards Wang Haiyang