注意文中出现的部分句子错误;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
When we can read,we have start to read some books whch are about language ,maths and science or something,because when we was child,our parents teach us that we are not a genius ,however reading can change our life and fate,so if you always waork hard,you will make an diffrent with others.Thus it's can be seen,reading is very important for everyone.Even if it is,we should choice which method to read?reading selectively or extensively?becasuse anyone do not have this opportunity to grasp both of them at the same time. In my opinion,reading selectively is advantage for us.When we read a good book ,it must better to read a bad one,that is why not all of the book is good for us,only this book's content to meet our needs and we can learning knowledge from this book,that's be useful for us.Actually,i think if a child can't choose a good book,i'll be worried about his future and his thought,it is reality a good or bad book can affct someone whole life,to be worse or to be better. That is so important for everyone that we should reading selectively.