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Visiting the Great Wall There are many places of interest in Beijing. And my favorite one is the Great Wall. The Great Wall is considered as one of the seven wonders of the world. It’s about six or seven metres high and four or five metres wide. It has a long history of 2,500 years. It was built by the Ancient Chinese working people. When we stood on it, we saw around. There are mountains around it. It looked like a huge dragon, magnificent and grand. It’s so famous that many people coming from every parts of the world visit it. The Great Wall is the pride of our nation.