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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
In order not to get wet owing to an unexpected rain, wise man will save an umbrella when it is sunny. Accordingly, it is unwise to put all your eggs in solely one basket. Putting all the eggs into a single basket is like to stay up studying on the eve of the final examination, which is beyond dispute and undoubtedly too late. If one did so, he would find out the other day that he had failed the exam, and owing to his carelessness, on the dropping of the basket he also lost all his eggs. It is undeniable that one can scarcely guarantee what will happen later on. If we don’t take precautions, things may get very tough and drag us into a desperate situation. That is why I insist on the point that we ought to divide the eggs into several groups and put each group into its respective container. By doing this, we are also saving ourselves a plan B in case of bad luck.
