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可适当增加从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。
In order not to get drenched in an undesirable rain, a wise man will save an umbrella when it is sunny. Accordingly, it is unwise to lay all your eggs in solely one basket. Putting all the eggs into a single basket is like to stay up studying on the eve of the final examination, which is beyond dispute of little use, and undoubtedly too late. If one did so, he would find out the next day that he had failed the exam, and due to his negligence, on the dropping of the basket he chucked away all at once all his eggs. It is undeniable that one can scarcely guarantee what will happen later on. If we don’t take precautions, things may get extremely tough and drag us into a desperate situation. That is why I insist on the point that we ought to divide the eggs into several groups and put each group into its respective container. By doing this, we are also saving ourselves a plan B in case of bad luck.
