高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

I like play sports very much.However,My favorite sport is play football. It was picked up to a football when I from school to home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that I love deeply to play it. Actually,I play train and join match with classmates afer class.My favorite footballs stars is BEKEHAMU and the best of my achievement is become a professional football player.