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I like sports very much.However,my favorite sport is play football. It was picked up to a football when I from school to home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that ,I love deeply to play it. Actually,I play train and make match with classmates afer class.My favorite footballs stars is BEKEHAMU and the best of my achievement become a professional football player.