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I like sports very much.However,my favorite sport is play football. It was picked up to a football when I from school to home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that ,I love deeply to play it. Actually,I play trainning and make a match with classmates afer class.My favorite footballs stars is BEKEHAMU and the best of my achievement become a professional football player.