作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用。
I like sports very much.However,my favorite sport is play football. It was picked up a football when I on my way home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that ,I deeply love to play it. Actually,I play training and make a match with classmates after class.My favorite footballs stars is David Beckham and the best of my achievement become a professional football player.