高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；文章层次较为清晰；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用。

I like sports very much.However,my favorite sport is play football. It was picked up a football when I on my way home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that ,I deeply love to play it. Actually,I play training and make a match with classmates after class.My favorite football stars is David Beckham and the best of my achievement become a professional football player.