简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰。
I like sports very much.However,my favorite sport is playing football. It was picked up a football when I on my way home by chance.Then I always play it with my friend.From that ,I deeply love to play it. Actually,I play training and make a match with classmates after class.My favorite footballs star is David Beckham and the best of my achievement become a professional football player.