采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
china is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit.if you ask me , where do i best like to go as a chinese? it is no dout to me to go to beijing. beijing is the certral of the cutral and gavernmental in china.if we want to learn chia as soon as,the first we should visit is beijing.