采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误。
China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit.If you ask me , where do I best like to go as a chinese? It is no dout to me to go to BeiJing. BeiJing is the centre of culture and government in China.If we want to learn chia as soon as,the first we should visit is BeiJing.