采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒。
China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit.If you ask me, where do I best like to go as the chinese? It is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of culture and government in China.If we want to learn Chnia as soon as,the first we should visit is Beijing.