采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit.If you ask me , where do i best like to go as the Chinese? it is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and governmental in China.If we want to learn China as soon as,the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of Chia,there are a large amount of places of interest,such as: The Great Wall, The Summer Palace, The Forbidden City and ect.Otherwise, there are quite a few delisious food.