2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。

China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit. If you ask me , where do I best like to go as the Chinese? it is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and governmen in China. If we want to learn China as soon as, the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of Chia,there are many places of interest, for example: The Great Wall, The Summer Palace, The Forbidden City and ect.Otherwise, there are quite a few delicious food.