采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit. If you ask me , where do I best like to go as the Chinese? It is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and government in China. If we want to learn China as soon as, the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of Chia,there are many places of interest, for example: The Great Wall, The Summer Palace, The Forbidden City and ect.Otherwise, there is quite a few delicious food.