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China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit. If you ask me , where do I best like to go as the Chinese? It is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and government in China. If we want to learn China as soon as, the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of Chia, there exist many places of interest.The Great Wall built inthousands of years ago, has long histoty,The Summer Palace is so.long long ago,The Forbidden City like the White House was where the chief leader lives and works. Therefore, knowning and visiting China,we are bound to go to Beijing. Otherwise, China is not only famous for the beautiful palaces,but also the delicious food.Eight Cuisines should be stressed.
