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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71621
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。

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China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit. If you ask me , where do I best like to go as the Chinese? It is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and government in China. If we want to learn China as soon as, the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China, there exist many places of interest.Has a long history,The Great Wall was built in thousands of years ago.The Summer Palace is such.Long long ago,The Forbidden City like the White House was where the chief leader lives and works. Therefore,visiting Binjing is the best choice to us to know China Otherwise, China is not only famous for the beautiful palaces,but also the delicious food.Eight Cuisines should be stressed.

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