2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

China is a large country, there are many beautiful places which we can visit. If you ask me , where is my favorite as the Chinese? there is no dout to me to go to Beijing. Beijing is the centre of the culture and government in China. If we want to learn China as soon as, the first we should visit is Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China, there exist many places of interest.Has a long history,The Great Wall was built in thousands of years ago.The Summer Palace is such.Long long ago,The Forbidden City like the White House was where the chief leader lives and works. Therefore,visiting Binjing is the best choice to us to know China Otherwise, China is not only famous for the beautiful palaces,but also the delicious food.Eight Cuisines should be stressed.