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Dear George, Very glad to have received your letter. Now I’d like to tell you about household hotels in my hometown.The household hotel is nice to stay in. Not only can you learn about China clearly, but also you can feel at home as well by dining with the family for only 20 yuan a day. Of course you can cook by yourself if the yuan each. You can bathe and swim in the sea, climb the hill and do unpaid jobs in the greenhouse if you’d like to. I'm looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua