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作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Meizhou, is a small and beautiful city of my hometown. Although it is not richer than other cities, it has a long history and a great local culture. when you walk in the street, you will feel comfortable and freedom. You should walk along the bridge called Meijiang bridge. It is about hundred years of history. In the past, Japanese armies wanted to destroy this bridge but it could not work. So people think that the bridge has a great power and they protect it very well. So the Meizhou government repair this bridge many times and make it more beautiful than before. At the end of the bridge, it is a small market. The buildings of Qing Dynasty were reserved well. When you walk here, it seem like stepping back in Qing Dynasty.
