2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦147:乘公交车上学

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I by bus go to school every day.but I don 't like by bus.beacuse in the bus, the air is not fresh.It‘s bad for our health.I hope road user can comply with highway code.If road is rush hour. we can make traffic jam.we hope a clean、fast road.we had create an environment. everyone like great fraffic。