the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是…
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。
简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;请作者增加词汇表达的灵活性,拼写检查也还需加强;语言不流畅。
outline: An autumn trip participator: New student of grade one Activity: In the morning: visit the botanical gardon and watch the exhibition of human and nature. In the afternoon: visit the Summer Palace The time and place of assembling: at 7.00 am on Dec 27th in school gate. Attention: 1)Please take the lunch with you. 2)Participator needs to come to student assciation to enter your name before this Thursday. Please be school gate on time.