2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦147:乘公交车上学

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色。

I go to school by bus every day.There are always many people waiting at the bus stop, because there is only one bus every 20 minute.It’s very difficult for students to get on the bus.The bus is full of people and some of them have to stand.It’s dangerous sometimes. And the air on the bus is not so fresh.It’s bad for our health.I hope there will be more buses.