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My hometown is NeiXiang, and there have a lot of in teresting place. I wish you are very happiness when you come in my hometown. The first interesting place of my hometown is NeiXiang XianYa, this is the ancient goverment, and now only have one in the world, it have a great number of value. So you are surprise and amazing if you can see it. The second interesting place of my hometown is water garden, every year have a lot of people come in here in the summer hoilday, you can see the turth face in here, I think you are happy when you will stay here. My hometown have some place is very interesting, but I can not say it, so I am very happy to invint you come here.
