文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a lot of friends. I play and study with them. We share all the interesting things with each other. Lily is the one of the best friends. We will go to school together everyday. She is a very lovely girl. She smiles all the time as if everything is good. She always said nothing is impossible if you can try. She is my best friend, and I love this smiled girl very much.