语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
Nowadays increasingly people draw a conclusion instantly when they saw or heard something without any thinkings. In effect, consideration is necessary. On the one hand,everybody are supposed to form the spirit of doubting everything around them whether it is true or not,which is so-called criticism. In addition,it is also the most significant quality that we appeal to in our process of being educated.Because the key of the education is critical and lateral thinking. On the other hand, in many occasions, instant conclusion often is a result of following others aimlessly and casually,also it is a behavior of non-confidence.Consequently, a deep thinking will prompt ourselves a lot both in character and quality.
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