语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。
Nowadays increasingly people draw a conclusion instantly when they saw or heard something without any thinking. In effect, consideration is necessary. On the one hand,everybody is supposed to own the spirit of doubting everything around them whether it is true or not,which is so-called criticism. In addition,it is also the most significant quality that we appeal to in our process of being educated.Because nature of the education is to form critical and lateral thinking. On the other hand, in many occasions, instant conclusion often is a result of following others aimlessly and casually,also it is a behavior of non-confidence.Consequently, a profound thinking will prompt ourselves a lot both in character and quality.
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