高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句偏多了。

MY HOMETWON My home is in Fujian.It is a pretty town. There are many trees around the little town . Fish swimming in the river. Although person are poor.there are old houses and small streets,but the life is so happy. But now，everywhere are high buildings and factory.And the technology cause serious environment problem.Fish and tree disappear. So，i want to say that we must protect the environment quickly.