文章用词太过单一,还要注意避免拼写错误;能够简单运用一些从句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It is not wise to draw the conclusion emmidietly when you see something or hearing something.All thing has its origin.What we see may one part of the thing,it can lead us to a wrong way.So we should know how the thing emerge,how it develop as well as how others access this things.As the saying goes:what you see may not the true of the things.
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