文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中简单句过多,建议增加长句;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear David I'm glad to known you will come Beijing to learn Chinese.Now I will tell you some thing about how to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful,lots of people want to learn Chinese.you should remember some word,and away reful.you should read Chinese everyday.you also could talk with your classmates,they will help you improve your Chinese fast.one day,i will look for you,and tell more how to learn Chinese. Wish look you soon. Yours Wangming
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