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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

From pie chart above, Hamburgers are undoubtedly the most popular fast food among all listed alternatives for American teenagers, which ranked number one on the Fast Food Preferences List, with 33% participants chose it as their favorite. And the second and third place go to Pizza and French Fries respectively, with 26% of the teens chose pizzas and 22% favored French Fries. However, the least popular fast food goes to the healthiest food among them, the Sushi, with only 3% of teens picked it as their priority. From the statistics, it can be inferred that American teens prefer foods with high sweet and high fat, in attractive package and with strong fragrance. Besides, they are much more likely to take a traditional western recipe than try exotic eastern foods. Moreover, as the only Asian food appeared on the American Teens’ Fast Food Preference List, Sushi may also represent senses of cultural familiarity and acknowledgement for American adolescents have for Japan and Japanese.

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