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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71621
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Welcome to my hometown.My hometown is Jie Yang,which is a small city of Guangzhou,thought small,it is beautiful very much.My hometown possess many famous and interesting view,If you come to here ,I will take you to visit these sceneries.I wil take you to the Xiangzi Bridge another name is Guangji Brige which is more famous in Chaozhou.The brige was built in Song Dynasty and it with the He bei Zhaozhou Brige,Quangzhou Luoyang Brige and Beijing Lugou Brige called together Chinese four ancient Brige.Eighteen Brige boats and twenty states become the special style of it. There was a legend said in the ancient,the productivity was fall behind so the brige was hard to build ,so after Hanyu arrived Chaozhou,he asked hie nephew Han Xiangzi and Guangji monk built the brige together ,so the folk spread the story of "immortal and monk built brige".In the early spring,the view of it is so wounderful , I think you will enjoy it.

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