作者词汇量偏少,也有些单词拼写错误;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
My favorite sports Do you want to know my favorite sports? Let me tell you. I like football, so I have love football many people. Of course, I also want to make friends. I think play football is good for our health. By chance, I see a football on the road, so playing it with my friends. From this time on, I find I really like football. My favorite football-star is Beckham. I want to be a professional football player. Like Beckham is.