采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
After sometimes a foreign friend of mine will come to China to visit me,as the hoster I should take him to the most interesting place to show my friendly. China is a big place with many interesting things,thinking deeply I decide to take him to Beijing to play. Beijing is an old city,it witness the history of China.and so many dynasties were come into being here,so that there are many interesting places constructed for royal to entertain,such as YI HE YUAN,YUAN MING YUAN,The Great Wall…… What's more,it's the capital of Chinese.So it has the different points of culture basic.Of course,it represent the development on economy of China. The most important thing is that the person of Beijing is very friendly like every city in China.I firmly believe that he will fall in love with there.