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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71621
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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After sometimes a foreign friend of mine will come to China to visit me,as the hoster I should take him to the most interesting place to show my friendly. China is a big place with many interesting things,thinking deeply I decide to take him to Beijing to play. Beijing is an old city,it witness the history of China.and so many dynasties were come into being here,so that there are many interesting places constructed for royal to entertain,such as YI HE YUAN,YUAN MING YUAN,The Great Wall…… What's more,it's the capital of Chinese.So it has the different points of culture basic.Of course,it represent the development on economy of China. The most important thing is that the person of Beijing is very friendly like every city in China.I firmly believe that he will fall in love with there.

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