拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. A excellent influence of study is caused by a good learning habit. There are lots of great habits we can develop like the accumulation. Accumulating a wealth of knowledge will be beneficial to our composition writing. To form the habit ,it is vital to read more and set down those difficult words and nice sentences. As an old saying goes,"Practice makes perfect." However, I find it hard to do it and I always can't carry my goal on. Therefore, I decide to turn to my parents and teachers to supervise my study,and I know ,nothing is more important than the fact that I should be more conscious of myself. In conclusion , I would like to say that we all can do it if we firmly want.