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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Less Pressure, Better Life Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!
